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--- public:my_review_of_star_wars_-_the_last_jedi [2017/12/20 09:26] – [Star Wars: Last Jedi Review] fangfufu
+++ public:my_review_of_star_wars_-_the_last_jedi [2017/12/20 09:51] – [Military of the Resistance] fangfufu
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 ===== Military of the Resistance =====
   * Lack of disicipline
-    * Capt Dameron disobeying order and continued the attack First Order destroyer
+    * Capt Dameron disobeying order and continued the attack on First Order destroyer
       * This resulted in a pyrrhic victory, and unnecessary loss of resistance personnel.
     * Cmdr Dameron mutinied over Vadm Holdo's order to abandon ship.
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       * This partially led to the mutiny.
       * It is reasonable to believe that Cmdr Dameron would not have put Finn and Rose at risk by sending them to First Order flagship, if he was informed of Vadm Holdo's plan.
-    * Rose stopped Finn from committing kamikaze, and ended up injuring herself. She managed to crash 2 Resistance vehicles in the process, and stopped both herself and Finn from fighting the battle.
+    * Rose stopped Finn from committing kamikaze, and ended up injuring herself. She managed to crash 2 Resistance vehicles in the process, and she managed to pull both herself and Finn away from the battlefield.
 ===== Military of the First Order =====
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 ===== Radicalisation of Kylo Ren =====
-Luke Skywalker tried to kill Kylo Ren while Ren was asleep.
+Luke Skywalker tried to kill Kylo Ren while Ren was asleep. Surely this is a safeguarding problem? I believe Skywalker needs to be reported to whatever government/authority they have. Skywalker's license to teach should have been revoked. Can you imagine if your lecturer / supervisor try to kill you, while you are taking a nap?
+In some ways, I believe Kylo Ren is a hero, he is trying to liberate the galaxy from this dangerous Jedi cult.
 ===== Conclusion =====